Ich wollte mal fragen, ob jemand von euch der gut Englisch kann, schnell diesen Text überfliegen kann und die gröbsten Fehler kurz nennen könnte. Wäre wirklich nett von euch Jungs (auch Mädels?)
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English – Referate
The Internet, who doesn’t know. it offers an enormous selection of information, purchase possibilities, leisure offers and in addition, dangers. Straight this variety lets us lose the overview very fast. The Internet makes the life for humans in many points easier. For example we can buy per Internet a big variety of things without leaving the house. Food, furniture, decoration, hardware, and so on. But the dangers how hackers or viruses are a big problem.
Now, the question arises: Is the Internet a friend or a foe?
The Internet exists since 1957 and since 1991 the Internet is used by many people and it covers a big offer. This technology changes the world society, because it limits our choices changes ways of living and working. The Internet makes available to use the unimaginable amounts of information. We change our social habits in more and more banking, shopping and entertainment, who isn’t face to face. Psychologist warn of dependence and ionieness. This is one of the greatest problem in connection with the Internet. Many children often sit for hours at the computer and surf in the Internet. Thus that the prices can be paid also overall and we can surf without limits, this danger is supported. The viruses and hackers represent a further danger, by trying to access our system or destroy it. For this problem I have some tips for you.
These are everything bad reasons, now I would like to tell you positives points and arguments. Well, there will be many new jobs, many unemployed persons find a job in the Internet and can earn money. Many people create a company, like I. In my leisure time I optimise websites for a better ranking in the search engines. In this way I earn a lot of money. Another argument is the online banking. It makes possible to settle banking transactions comfortably at home. But the bad site of this is the fact, that some 150’000 banking employees lost their jobs.
To end the conclusion, I would like to tell you my own opinion. I think, the Internet brings more positives points, because we can resist and protect many of the dangers. The greatest advantages for me are, to send free sms, earn a lot of money, cheap buying and to communicate with my clients and friends.
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Ich danke euch im Voraus
1000-dank mfg stefan
